中国留学网 > 出国考试 > SAT > SAT写作 > SAT,写作语句优化练习题:正文
搜索

SAT,写作语句优化练习题

留学快车整理  09-08-06 00:00:00 责任编辑:蔡宇 我要评论 选校

重新整理下列句子,运用更具体的动词和名词

1. The streetlights were brighter and then were dimmer as the electricity was interrupted by the storm.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

2. The moviegoers were angry with the people talking.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

重新整理下列句子, 运用动词

3. Only two questions were missed by John on his history examination.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

4. The opposing team’s large half-time lead was overcome, and the game was easily won by our team.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

5. Her fear of an avalanche was Kathy’s reason to ski as fast as she could.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

6. The first cold morning of autumn is invigorating to me.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

7. Jamie and Ali were focused on their game.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

运通同义词代替语句中的斜体字

8. Surveys often use guesses to calculate certain statistics.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

9. The poet’s image of a golden day seemed to establish to overall mood of the poem very well.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

10. The robin’s egg was concealed in its home of twigs.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

换到语句中的陈词谰言

11. A light went off in Carla’s head and she figured out the solution to her problem.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

12. When the supervisor told me that I was getting a raise, it was music to my ears.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

运用精准的单词更改语句中的委婉语

13. The political candidates had a frank exchange of views.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

14. Dave enjoyed going out to eat with his friends, but his table manners were lacking in polish.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

15. As children, the boys relied on the pugilistic arts to solve their disagreements.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

运用精准的单词更改语句中含糊不清的词汇

16. The nimble dashing flow of water changed from a bluish hue to moving snow as it cascaded over the granite pillow below.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

17. The book society sought celebrated wordsmiths to elevate its literary audience.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

整理下列语句,更换掉过于华丽的词汇

18. Reggie’s decision not to have a DJ for the party show how stubborn and inept he is at planning social engagements.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

19. The generous and giving nature of Tan was manifested by his gift to the university.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

20. The sustaining values that parents convey to their progeny is created through the multitudinous experiences one has in a lifetime.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

整理下列语句,更换掉语句中的俚语

21. The stock broker told his client that the company’s earnings and P/E multiple indicated that the equity would increase in value.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

22. The interaction of the pressure gradients was indicative of a coming rainstorm.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

整理下列语句,更换掉语句中的不恰当的词语

23. It is a fact that Sun is the fastest runner in the school.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

24. Kristalle did not get the job that she wanted due to the fact that she did not turn in her application on time. ?

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

25. A great deal of time and money is spent on scientific projects that have uncertain benefits.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

26. I find that to understand an assignment I often have to read it a couple of times and take notes.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

27. The golden retriever ran around the side of the corner of the building to get the stray ball that was thrown by the girl.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

整理下列语句,让语句更简洁

28. The tasks that are placed before American politicians change from time to time due to new priorities.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

29. Mary worked hard to complete her reading, and then she worked on her term paper.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

30. The sailors watched from the deck as the golden orb of the setting sun made its final appearance a it set behind the clouds.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

整理下列语句,在不更改语句含义的情况下,将语句合并起来,使其更简洁

31. In the past, it was common to find social functions for the young centered on the family. Today, most social functions are associated with school in some fashion.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

32. Wonda, Carla, and Jaresa were in a argument. They were upset because each of them wanted to be the lead singer.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

整理下列语句,在不更改语句含义的情况下,将语句剪断,使其更简洁

33. Since the United States was first created, political parties were developed so that people with essentially the same viewpoint had a means of expressing their thoughts as to how the government should be run.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

34. A lunar eclipse occurs when a shadow caused by the earth blocking the light from the sun fall across the visible portion of the moon, but not all observers see the same thing because of their unique view of the moon.

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

————————————————————————————————————

参考答案

1. The streetlights brightened and dimmed as the storm interrupted the electricity.

2. The moviegoers complained about the people talking.

3. John missed only two questions on his history examination.

4. Our team overcame the opposing team’s large half-time lead and went on to win the game easily.

5. Kathy skied as fast as she could to avoid an avalanche.

6. The first frost of autumn energizes me.

7. Jamie and Ali concentrated on their game.

8. Surveys often use estimates to calculate certain statistics.

9. The poet’s image of a sunny day seemed to establish the overall mood of the poem very well.

10. The robin’s egg was nestled in its home of twigs.

11. Carla suddenly understood and was able to solve her problem

12. When the supervisor told me that I was getting a raise, I was happy.

13. The political candidates disagreed.

14. Dave enjoyed going out to eat with his friends, but his table manners were poor.

15. As children, the boys solved their disagreements by fighting.

16 The river changed from blue to white as it cascaded over the rocks

17. The literary society searched for well-known authors to interest its members. ?

18. Reggie’s decision not to have a DJ for the party shows how little experience he has in planning parties.

19. Tam’s generosity was evident in his gift to the university.

20. A lifetime of experiences creates lasting values that parents pass on to children.

21. The stockbroker told his client that based on past performance, the company’s stock price would rise.

22. The forecast called for rain.

23. Sun is the fastest runner in the school.

24. Kristalle did not get the job that she wanted because she did not turn in her application on time.

25. Significant time and money is spent on scientific projects that have uncertain benefits.

26. To understand an assignment, I often have to read it several times and take notes.

27. The golden retriever ran around the corner of the building to get the stray ball that the girl had thrown.

28. The tasks for American politicians periodically change due to new priorities.

29. Mary worked hard to complete her reading and then her term paper.

30. The sailors on the deck watched the setting sun disappear behind the clouds.

31. Social functions in the past were family-oriented, but today they are school- centered.

32. Wonda, Carla, and Jaresa argued passionately about who should be the lead singer.

33. Political parties were developed in the United States so that like-minded people could express their opinions about the government.

34. Observers in various areas of the earth see different views of a lunar eclipse, which is created by the earth’s shadow on the moon blocking the sunlight.

专题链接
    登录 (请登录发言,并遵守相关规定)